We Are Not From Here Poem by Maria Mitea

We Are Not From Here

Rating: 5.0


like a wind that burns your chest
we did it again
we did it the same
again
soul made from the mother's milk soul, hold me
cover me
wrap me in your clay
like a lost child weeping in the streets
without villages, cities
without a country
or a mother
born in war
warm me in your nest under the eaves
you know? sometimes you can't be found anywhere
and even i know we are not from here
and all is fado, - meat in the ditch
grave in the sea
i'm still looking for you everywhere
then
i return to our house in the air
in the air

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 16 March 2022

Very thought-provoking poem about the excruciatingly painful after effects of war. Excellently crafted, Maria.

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Maria Mitea 17 March 2022

Hi Richard! All my gratitude for reading and writing a com! No to war! May we all find peace.

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 17 March 2022

Yes, those who are going through the process of the war, they only know what is the ground reality, for us, we are silent watchers from outside and try to access and gauge their pains. Full Stars****

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Maria Mitea 17 March 2022

Hi Asim! True, Much appreciated your bold comment!

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 March 2022

A profoundly painful poem. The agonising effects of war right on the doorstep effectively depicted. The images and phrases used to augment emotions stops just short of an outburst.

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Rob Lamberton 12 February 2023

To be without home, without loved ones, almost without breath! Makes you want to run till the air burns your chest!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 April 2022

Wonderful. Liked the emphasis...in the air, in the air.5 stars and to my favourite

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 March 2022

5. I need to come back here!

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 March 2022

4. " like a lost child weeping in the streets without villages, cities without a country or a mother"…. My heart stops beating for few seconds…..

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Unnikrishnan E S 17 March 2022

I had to make a revisit. To read this gem of a poem once again. Thank you

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