This Is Where I End Poem by Emily Ramsdayle

You did a great work, but I think it soud a little better the way Justin put it.

Here would be my write of it. Hopeless cries Amongst the silence. Brotherhood quietly dies In the arms of the violence. Chorus~ I was taken by you Replaced by someone new But how, now, can I face myself When I'm viewed as someone else? Please won’t you save me; my love. I need you again. Forsaken words With each empty promise Beauty begins to hurt Consumed by the darkness. ~ I was taken by you Replaced by someone new But how, now, can I face myself When I'm viewed as someone else? Please won’t you save me; my love. I need you again. I won't take this. But I am breaking. Why can't I make it? ~ Right in front of me Stands a world that’s free. But how, now, can I face myself When I'm viewed someone else? Please won’t you save me; my love. I need you again.. Is this where it ends? Yes. This is where I end.