This Life Poem by Tanner Geldart

This Life

Rating: 5.0


This life is not what it seems
With all the shining beams of light
Meant to draw you in
But I am here to fill you in
That this world is an unforgiving place
Any time every place there is always hate

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Taylor Fong 26 June 2009

i know what you mean dude. really good.

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Alex Lewis 26 June 2009

I wrote a similar poem called 'I Accidently Died'. I enjoy this poem. 10+

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Tanner Geldart

Tanner Geldart

Truro, Nova Scotia, Canada
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