This Simple Small Poem Poem by Shalom Freedman

This Simple Small Poem



THIS SIMPLE POEM (Four variants)

This simple poem
filters
through its small lines
The small light I have now
All I can write.

2)
This simple small poem
Filters through its small lines
The small life I have now
My only light.

3)
This simple small poem
Condenses
In its small lines
My life and my light
My fading in time.

4)
This simple small poem
Reflects in its small lines
The light of my life
Fading in time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 05 May 2008

All variants depict different moods in life: happy, hope, frustrations, hopelessness. Many can relate to this four variants. Good one.

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Shalom Freedman

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