from a sea of dreams
reality crashes through.
Through the whispering leaves
Autumn makes things new
From a road through the mind
Reality is the destination
in the back of my mind
I jump to it without hesitation
Like a wish that is blessed
yet ends up a disaster
I feel I am pressed
upon an unlucky star
Very nice Tiyler.........interesting thoughts. I hope your luck changes for you! sincerely, Mary
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
tiyler durden, what a lovely dreamy feel, your poem has. I didn't think you had it in you, to be honest! lol I was a little unsure of the two minds in the 2nd stanza, they kind of holted the smooth flow a little. Thoroughly enjoyable, all the same. 9 from Tai, pickie today.