Three Poem by Aaron Myers

Three

Rating: 5.0


There's a girl on my bed,
another on my mind,
and to make things worse there's one on the phone
telling me that she's decided she doesn't want to be alone.

Let's start with the first
a drunken resort
but she must be cursed
'cos nobody ever calls her the morning after.

I'd rather not mention the second;
the most clever and perhaps the most pretty
She says 'life's to short to get caught up
in something (or someone?) so petty'

The third is the only one that doesn't make me feel
sick or angry or both (with myself?)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 16 September 2007

Hey, but think of it this way, Aaron...if this were Baseball...you'd be batting.333, and more than likely be considered an All-Star! lol! ...But this poem, as far as literary value goes, works a wee bit differently in the evaluation process...Yoiu see, a 10, is all PH will allow me to grace you with...and so i will...Very inventive work, Aaron. ~ FjR ~

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Ronald Stroman 16 September 2007

nicely written....................... i enjoyed. take care.

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