Threshing Waters Poem by Elliott Rosenberg

Threshing Waters

Rating: 5.0


It was through an oblique looking glass,
That I peered haltingly into your vernal eyes,
Laden with uncertainty,
To see darkness milling away at your heart.

Then your sheepish smile called me,
To gaze disparagingly upon your cheery self,
Rolling fags in winter,
exhaling midnight laughter as prophesies progress.

Jonas spoke to the merry folk,
Who sang of calamities at sea,
Who bowed not to Grendel,
But to the flasks of Dublin rye.

Raise your oars in advent,
Give homage to the impetus of God,
Brace yourselves for salvation,
For the viscous eddy currents have died.

A cicerone halo maunders,
half mast beneath an errant moon,
Imbibing tears weary of battle
exhumed from your fissured lips.

But I stopped to kiss the ground,
That was not there to kiss,
For the raging waters thresh themselves,
Leaving sanity stupefied this glorious morning.

And so I tilled the fatty land,
Free of patsies, derelicts and purveyors too,
Rose above their headstones,
And waged an angelic war.

Batten down the hatches! ,
Prepare to be swallowed unforgivingly! ,
For heavens rapture wants us,
As an omen of discordant love.

Strength and dominion forestalled,
A barbed noose subtly choking me,
As penance rivaled our stewardship,
Earmarked for destruction.

All is calm now,
All is fine,
A bluebird has come to give us flight,
Deciduously leaving its feathers deep in our hearts.

Beyond a swollen iris,
Somewhere in ourselves,
Where color makes no difference,
A last plume will shed playing a festal note.

And we will know.
Of this heavenly constable,
This mighty bird of dawn,
Who perches itself in meek silence,
A vanguard of sterling regard.

Sunday, February 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: aspiration,flight,god,hope,paris,salvation,silence
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Somewhere over the Atlantic Ocean, in a sheer state of docility I met Courtney, a canonized fireball emasculated to a woman's body.
Her eyes glow with fervor as she calls me to her side. She senses the writer in me, tamed in the mirror of her soul.
And so I dedicate this poem to her January 30th,2016 as I take an evening stroll in Montparnasse, briefly saluting Balzac with hope that truth endows honesty.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 07 February 2016

Mind blowing narration of the confrontation with Courtney on dock of a vessel witnessed by threshing sea waters. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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