Kelsea Osterman

Tick-Tock - Poem by Kelsea Osterman

Time just seems to go straight on by
Nothing seems to be the same
Ever since you left time just slips right past me
The time just drifts on and on.
That noise it just keeps going.
Why won't it stop
Why won't time just stop
It's like the beating of my heart
Will you just stop
Stop for just one minute
Just stop and let me think for just one second.
My god how can this be.
With the shattering of my heart I pray that it just stops
I can no long take this madness
It just needs to end.
I need to smash it.
Smash it till it bleeds
The way you made my heart bleed
I need it to end
My god I'm simply going insane.

Comments about Tick-Tock by Kelsea Osterman

  • Rookie Kelly Seale (10/3/2012 1:13:00 PM)

    Time... why you punish me... Hootie n the Blowfish

    The mundane tick-tock of the clock can drive anyonce nuts when someone is on your mind, and your heart is broken... well penned Kelsea....; -)
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  • Rookie Sally Ann Jackson (9/27/2012 8:07:00 AM)

    Great write obviously a poem from the heart.
    I think getting your words down helps to make sense of a
    Situation & helps you to proccess it deal with it
    Then put it away x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Adam Reed (9/26/2012 3:32:00 PM)

    Effective lol it gets the point across ive been there. Im glad someone else wrote something like this but im sorry about the hurtful part. It sucks when thats the inspiration to write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 196 Points Avik Datta Gupta (9/26/2012 2:54:00 PM)

    HA HA Good One...! Sometimes the guardian of time becomes our worst enemies! ! Very Well Written (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,336 Points Jerry Hughes (9/11/2012 8:58:00 PM)

    A tad dramatic Kelsea however, if you really believe life's not worth living end it! Cheers Jerry (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 11, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 12, 2012

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