Time Flows Poem by Luo Zhihai

Time Flows

Rating: 5.0


Time Flows

In a flash, I sigh the glorious youth goes
You know the past turns around and flows
Spring dream with flowers always grows old
Helpless autumn wind accompanies moon in sorrow

Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
The 11,012th Two Pairs of Couplets,11/23/2020


时光流逝

我叹韶光弹指逝
君知往事转身流
从来春梦随花老
无奈秋风伴月愁

格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
第11012首对联体诗 2020年11月23日

Monday, November 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: flow,past,spring,time,you,youth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 November 2020

Time has its own course. It flies fast and just flows. A beautiful poignant poem. Great imagery.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 November 2020

A well crafted piece...... Truly delightful and fabulous...5 stars *****

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Luo Zhihai 30 November 2020

Life is beautiful! It's a poem, too!

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Luo Zhihai

Luo Zhihai

Haifeng / Shanwei / Guangdong / China
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