Time To Leave Poem by Luwi Habte

Time To Leave

Rating: 5.0


It comes,
The harder times
For me to live all alone
With out my will you will be gone

It comes,
To stay with different faces
For me to feel lonely
With out you, rubber of my felony

It comes,
To face life phrases
For me to rain my tears
Rather than you, you know nobody cares,

Where are my tears going to be saved?
Who is going let me laugh when I cried?
Who is going to advice me when I stay mistaken?
Who is going to support me when I got winning?

Who is going to take good care of me?
Who is going to console and support me?
Do you think that i will handle that hard
With out you my caring friend?

Oct 6,09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 16 October 2009

that's good sentiments...worth to keep in heart... emotive expressive write Luwi...thanks...my ten for this

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Emma Adamyan 11 October 2009

TALENTED done........... no wonder, for her name`s Luwi :)

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 08 October 2009

very sensitive words. full of prayers and positive hopes. keep writing!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 October 2009

Thanks for taking good care of me as your little sister dear love you with all my heart Dedicated to my beloved brother and caring friend Dadsh...it is so nicely worded poem and it is good to fidplace among our own people and to live with.... i liked it dear.....1o read mine....yes to to..yes yes yes

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