To Be Touched Poem by Michael McCall

To Be Touched



Your hot breath on my chest
Congers images of burning flesh
Bends life through a prism
And cast nothing
It’s as relentless as fire
As final as death
And I hate nothing more then this

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Delwen Doyle 28 August 2008

passionate & intense nicely done!

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Pied Piper Berry 22 August 2008

I would agree with Steven Feanley below. Your poem is vivid and memorable. It is very angry but well written.

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Ronald Stroman 15 August 2008

yr poem don't need no toothpaste. it smells fresh. continue poetically. take care.

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Steven Fearnley 15 August 2008

great poem, concise, vivid, memorable.

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