'To M.C. - My Moral Coach Poem by Margaret Alice

'To M.C. - My Moral Coach

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You believe in principles inviolate
while I believe in you only,
you believe in absolute truth
while all I can see is subjectivity.

I tried living according to
your theory – and guess what?
There was nobody left in my life.
I was bereft because nobody

could meet the high ideals you
and John C. Maxwell state to
be preconditions for living life
with integrity

my integrity is suspect I suppose
as I cannot meet your high standards
for morality, I am so human
and so fallible whereas you

insist on the highest principles
but maybe, just maybe
love unconditionally is quite enough –
I’m willing to give it a try, tonight…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alto Thomas Jr 08 May 2008

Haunting and insightful. Great work.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 25 April 2008

Hello Margaret, wow, what a nice moving poem. Very good read, LC

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Kye Kurion 22 April 2008

Such a powerful poem, you did well Margaret.

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Excellent Work here, Margaret....Nice tight-cropt, even-flowing structure.... A fine tribtive, for someone quite lucky indeed....Solid Crafting! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Margaret Alice

Margaret Alice

Pretoria - South Africa
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