dear Udaya, may I suggest a variation?
'' Old moon far away
In a boundless universe
A mother's love:
A dot for a satellite
Her exiled son won't be lost ''
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dear Udaya, may I suggest a variation? '' Old moon far away In a boundless universe A mother's love: A dot for a satellite Her exiled son won't be lost ''
my pleasure - really glad you like the variation
why not, beautiful.. Seriously thanks for your editing and guide. I will include the new version