To Mother From Exiled Son (Tanka) Poem by Udaya R. Tennakoon

To Mother From Exiled Son (Tanka)



Old moon far away
In a boundless universe
A mother's love:
A dot for a satellite
Her exiled son won't be lost

Sunday, May 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,mother
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 11 May 2016

dear Udaya, may I suggest a variation? '' Old moon far away In a boundless universe A mother's love: A dot for a satellite Her exiled son won't be lost ''

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Fabrizio Frosini 11 May 2016

my pleasure - really glad you like the variation

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why not, beautiful.. Seriously thanks for your editing and guide. I will include the new version

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