To My Dying Heart Poem by Ann Marge

To My Dying Heart

Rating: 4.2


I hardly know you
but i've seen you for a lifetime
in my lucid dreams,
in my wide awakes and
deep into my sleeping states
you've grown on me
like ivy
like mushrooms
because it always rains on me
and you can be like home
coming and going
always around
but never
truly mine

I can't hold you for long
I will not hear you anymore
at some point
I will dive deep into you
and hear you only from the inside
like you hear yourself, with the same voice
for the same ears
from the same heart.

Wednesday, June 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 29 June 2017

A powerful message of love. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Andreea Margarint 29 June 2017

Thank you, Jazib

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 June 2017

but i've seen you for a lifetime in my lucid dreams, in my wide awakes and deep into my sleeping states you've grown on me..........I will dive deep into you to hear you from your inside. very fine poem on love.... very imaginative and creative you are. thank you dear poetess. tony

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Andreea Margarint 29 June 2017

Thank you for your kind words, Tony!

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Andreea Margarint 29 June 2017

Thank you Shannon! It was really spontaneous and only after your comment I read it again and again and realised what I wrote. Human mind is beautiful

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 September 2019

you've grown on me like ivy like mushrooms because it always rains on me and you can be like home.. very original inthoughts and expressions. tha nk u. tony

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Messaoud Allalouche 31 August 2017

very beautiful poem I like very much

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Cheryl Tutaan 28 August 2017

I hardly know you but i've seen you for a lifetime... Truly a heartfelt poem...full of emotions... you would also visit my Raindrops keeps on Falling thank you, Ann...perfect 10! Cheryl

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Simone Inez Harriman 02 July 2017

Sometimes we just know..... people, places, previous spirit souls....sometimes situations are not mean't to be in this lifetime...yet, destined for the right time. You're very talented Ann.

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Ella Lazaare 30 June 2017

What an effective portrayal of the desire to really KNOW someone! Hearing from the inside is really the deepest level of love, one that we all hope to achieve someday. Yet again, you have somehow put universal feelings into words.

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