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to the light

to the light
we aim ourselves
away from darkness
we swear

but i guess
not too much light
in the same manner
that i do not
have so much of
this darkness

to both
we shall be blinded
let us settle
midway

to dusk let us toast
this drink
of gray

Submitted: Wednesday, September 16, 2009


Comments about this poem ( to the light by RIC S. BASTASA )

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  • Gajanan Mishra (2/10/2012 8:21:00 AM)

    Very good poem. I like it.congratulation.

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  • Effie Yalena Steyn (9/20/2009 4:36:00 PM)

    This is truly beautiful, thank you.
    Effie.

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  • Ahmad Shiddiqi (9/16/2009 7:13:00 PM)

    truely relieving. keep writing!

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  • Catrina Heart (9/16/2009 5:44:00 AM)

    nice written poem........loved it! ! !

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