Together We Can Do It Poem by Rajkumar Mukherjee

Together We Can Do It

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TOGETHER WE CAN DO IT

only do I know
where the shoe pinches
why the heart bleeds
at the darkest hours of night


only do I realise
which cloud brings rain
and who heralds the westwind
harbinger of new life on earth


inspite of your nearness to soil
you are unable to identify
and forecast the above happenings


with so much access to technology
nor can I predict correctly
when there will be flood earthquake
drought or an epidemic
of mass loss of life


let's join hands together
to cover each other's weaknesses
and make the earth
a better living planet



RAJKUMAR - MUMBAI

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naidz Ladia 20 March 2009

'with so much access to technology nor can I predict correctly when there will be flood earthquake drought or an epidemic of mass loss of life let's join hands together to cover each other's weaknesses and make the earth a better living planet''.....i quote these lines coz for me, these stanzas are the highlights..you mentioned bout unpredictable situation examples earthquake..ya, u r right, tho we can measure the magnitude and the intensity but we dont know when it happens, so, we cant predict the time.......in our life where the world is already old, we should be open to give good ideas for the good of the group..hand in hand we stand as the motto says..countries regardless of culture and beliefs should do good things for their countries so that no more wars, discriminations....overpowering is one reason of misunderstanding...if we could do the hand in hand method, the better, inorder to have even and equal mission in life..this is a very beautiful eye opener..if only all people have good relationship, peace in this world is visible..i like very much this piece...all words are true, properly lined with real situations, so this is real not a fallacy...naizz

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