Tonight Poem by Clyde King

Tonight

Rating: 4.7


Tonight the moon has
a death's shroud around it.
A cold wind is out of the northwest.
The candles gutter
as the cold air trickles
around the old splintered
window and door.
My bed is cold and so am I.
Why did you leave me
here alone to talk
with ghosts? The wine bottle
is nearly empty. I hear mice
running across the ceiling
and I pull the sleeping bag
over my head, wishing
it were morning.

Dec.2020

Tonight
Tuesday, December 1, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: loss,love,loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M.S.Newhadney 02 December 2020

If the story of poem is real, I do hope you find someone new to decrease the hardship of loneliness. At that time, watching candles guttering would be a nice experience.

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Mahtab Bangalee 01 December 2020

beautifully described the loneliness, loss and love in this poem; nice

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Khairul Ahsan 01 December 2020

A nice poem, expressing the lonely feelings of the poet on a cold, Wintry night. 'My bed is cold and so am I' - evokes thoughts on how good a warm companion can be, on a cold bed! 'I pull the sleeping bag over my head, wishing it were morning.' - Nice! Some of my childhood thoughts were like this, in Winter nights.

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Varsha M 01 December 2020

You have actually penned so well the beauty your wife of painted in your life that even wine can't replace so well brought the lonliness. Beautiful. Thank-you Sir.

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Varsha M 01 December 2020

You have actually penned so well the beauty your wife of painted in your life that even wine can't replace so well brought the lonliness. Thank-you Sir.

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Clyde King

Clyde King

San Antonio, Texas
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