Too Far......Still Missing You... Poem by Otieno Albert

Too Far......Still Missing You...



Every morning I wake up

Realizing you're really far away

So I put together my 2 hands

And pray for a good day.



I know God's watching

And he'll lead me back to you

I just have to keep living

So she can see me through.



Although you're not close

And many miles away

I'll still love you

Even after today.



I really miss you dearly

And really wish I was there

But despite of not having you here

At least I still have air.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Umaprosad Das 24 December 2011

Dear Otieno Albert, You are far away from your sweet-heart, And what sad-feelings you now do suffer, You have depicted it in a nice manner. It is well done, a grand composition, I offer my heartiest appreciation. Only I'm a bit confused to go through, The line 'So she can see me through' Whom have you mentioned as 'she'? When you addressed by 'you' i.e. thee. Is it requires a change? Or myself is in mistaken?

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