Torn Between The Two Poem by hazel jackson

Torn Between The Two

Rating: 5.0


You make it so hard for me to choose because there's you and then there's him how the hell do you decide between two beautiful people with a heart so big.

My head throbs my heart hurts my hands tremble my body aches what am I supposed to do I've never had to do it before...I've never been more afraid in my life.

To make it worse I don't want to lose neither of you but I know I have to choose I'm so torn between the two that I feel it would be easier to leave but something holds me here and it will not let me go

I tried to hide but your words always find me all I hear is 'you have to choose it can't be us two'.. and then it echoes like it's bouncing off Hollow walls in an empty room ' CHOOSE'..

I've cried so much I have none left to fall now all I have is a head that aches a body that throbs and a heart that hurts because it's torn between the two.....How the hell do I choose..?

Thursday, October 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: decisions,heartache,relationships
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 12 October 2017

Such a very lovely poem, Hazel... Reminds me of the song TORN BETWEEN TWO LOVERS popularized by MARY MAC GREGOR... a perfect 10+++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

Getting aches, throbs, trembling and getting hurt are sings of depression and anxiety. These provoke thought and affect decision making process. You try to hide these and you try to explore new ideas. Amazing and brilliant poem is shared.10

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