Total Chaos Poem by Larry Bulot

Total Chaos

Rating: 4.8


Up in arms who's right, who's wrong?
inflicting harm where we don't belong?
in to war, was it truth we heard?
another war some call absurd
distant wars our soldiers fight
A mental torture day and night
twisted signs consume their minds
death is soon, no sands of time
Total Chaos, kill them all and prevail!
Total Chaos, do we trust the story they tell?
Blinding freedom turns our heads
they build their kingdom, thousands dead
evil intentions? power play?
does our intervention pave the way?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raven Bishop 14 October 2009

Hey, what a fine write! Time is too short for wars and hate.

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Tyease Collins 17 January 2009

Wow this poem is awesome! i love the line: 'inflicting harm where we don't belong? ' Very powerful stuff -Tyease

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this is gr8t bro.. i love it. very thoughtful n true eh...

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Patrick McFarland 03 January 2009

Well said Larry. A 10 from me.

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januel l 03 January 2009

this is great, keep writing

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