''Touch'' Poem by seemakhera (Aanamika 805)

''Touch''

Rating: 5.0


One night I saw a dream....
I was standing in house of fire....
and I scream.....
Someone came and asked me....
Whats ur Desire...
Love or Life.....
If you chose your love...
you have to stay here....
Life is no chice for me
I said without fear...
He told me....
wat makes you think
you can stay in this Fire....
I replied her ''TOUCH''
Is more hotter than this Fire......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 11 October 2009

Intelligent expression. A touch of desire Burns deeper than fire. There is balm for burns, Lusty desire has no u turn. CP

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Catrina Heart 08 October 2009

well expressed piece...........a touch is much hotter than a fire! Great.......

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smart poem, , well said...

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