Traces Poem by Meagan Slack

Traces

Rating: 4.5


As dawn breaks
My fear arises
My soal aches
As the sun rises

Voices hushed
Secrets hidden
Dreams are crushed
Hopes forbidden

Darkness trickles in
Lights go out
Traces of what has been
Turn into traces of doubt

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arianna Loshnowksy 05 May 2009

wow... this is good XD this is the first one i've read of yours but i like it... lol i'm gonna go read some more! XD

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Susan Bagley 01 May 2009

Very nice as are all of your poems so far Meagan. I hope you continue to submit and to write prolifically. I started writing at a young age and then for a long time I produced so little. I regret it now but you can't go back. So write till you cannot lift a pen and then dictate it to someone else. Great work. Susan

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