Trading Places Poem by Cj Heck

Cj Heck

Cj Heck

Born in Columbus OH - living in Florida

Trading Places

Rating: 4.8


holding her in the afterglow
where words were
never really needed,
he was fond of whispering
that it was all her

then he would smile and add
that he merely
followed her lead

if only heaven would allow her
one wish,
one clear and stunning wish,
she would use that wish
to trade places
just one time
when they made love

then she could know
what it feels like
to be him
and he could experience
in that one time
the joy it was to be her

and he would see, first hand,
why she always answered
that it was all him

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Morris 15 December 2005

Superb, C.J. I would never have thought of such a unique angle on the subject. One of the things I admire most about your work is the way you use 'unpoetic' words to write such personal poetry.With every best wish

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Joseph Daly 14 December 2005

Stunning CJ. It is always frustrating to explain how one feels at a certain time, then we wish for the impossible, knowing that it will never happen. This is a beautiful meditation on yearning. Well done CJ. As ever Denis Joe

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Declan McHenry 14 December 2005

CJ, That is so moving. I'm speechless. Really really moving.

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