Trance Of Romance Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Trance Of Romance

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A sapling in a severe drought
what she needs is moisture to survive?
The Ogre shows a goodwill and who crawls
to the scenario for the redress.
But she cannot uproot and how can she abandon
her kith and kin?
She has already mesmerized by his laudable dialects
and does she obey to this Monster? .
She dreams of the fertile soil where she goes to bear flowers
in the next summer.
She bow and stretch her springy hands
to this promiscuous lover
who takes her cunningly to the Utopia.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emma Johnson 29 June 2006

A wonderful piece of Symbolism. Susie.

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Patricia Gale 28 June 2006

Very creative, wonderful tale

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Sandra Fowler 28 June 2006

A rich fairy tale that is not fated to have a happy ending. Very creative thinking, Nimal. Sandra

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Duncan Wyllie 28 June 2006

A mixed blend of feelings and colourful language, you tell them with a unique pattern and style, much talent displayed Love Duncan X

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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