nimal dunuhinga

Rookie - 145 Points (19, April,1951 / kalubovila East, Sri Lanka)

A Blind Lover's Lament - Poem by nimal dunuhinga

He sees her broken heart through his gloomy eyes
And he hears a song like a prayer in a cathedral.
He tries to re-set but it's very hard to bring it back to normal.

Comments about A Blind Lover's Lament by nimal dunuhinga

  • Bronze Star - 2,536 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (11/16/2010 11:07:00 AM)

    When I reset sometimes things get worse. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 719 Points Lalitha iyer (7/14/2010 3:21:00 AM)

    Dear friend, I beg to differ from your views.........A partner/mate/companion is not be viewed from the physical sense and material and worldly utility point of view. Every man however he is handicapped or in that case woman is equally enjoyable and worth the company and life as anybody else.... So I am first of all with all immaturity and indignation record my the lines shall be read like this: : : : : hope you tolerate my only a dear friend..........i am penning the following........

    He feels her pulsating heart
    through his blind eyes
    and flooding delight
    trickles down his lashes
    he discovers new visions
    deep inside his mansions
    slowly he comes alive
    relishing the sight stemming within.......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 173 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (5/1/2010 2:16:00 AM)

    Viewing her thro’ self viewing ... a nice paradigm…with splash of mellowencholy [mellow +melancholy]
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,671 Points Rachel Ann Butler (11/9/2009 12:38:00 PM)

    'And he hears a song like a prayer in a cathedral'

    Rachel Ann Butler (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (9/14/2009 1:55:00 AM)

    'and he hears a song like a prayer in a cathedral'. What a beautiful line.
    This one hurt you into poetry.10/10.

    Always your friend,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (9/13/2009 11:15:00 AM)

    A strong piece Nimal

    All the best

    Love duncan X (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (5/31/2009 9:57:00 AM)

    yeah nice, poetic lines..thanks...and I know broken hearts are hard to mend, I m whether my heart is ever gonna fix 10+++.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (3/19/2008 10:56:00 PM)

    A melancholy poem with the simplicity and economy of a haiku. Eloquent and sad. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 14, 2008

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