Jake Gassiot

Rookie (1/31/89 / Texas)

Tranquility - Poem by Jake Gassiot

I sit high in this tree
In complete tranquility

This bed of ropes
I tied with hopes
That I could find
A state of mind
In this tree
Of tranquility

My frustrated soul
Searching for its goal
Climbing the ropes oh life
Past the knots of strife
In this tree
Of tranquility

I sit here now
Sweat on my brow
Looking into the sky
This is how I fly
In this tree
Of tranquility


Comments about Tranquility by Jake Gassiot

  • Rookie Gabriella Franco (8/23/2006 6:58:00 PM)

    mm wonderfully done, Iw ondered what the big 'punch line', if you will, at the end would be. I love this one. and the analogy is very impressive...

    good job! : -P

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  • Rookie Chase Goody (5/8/2006 9:00:00 PM)

    this is beautiful, i like it bunches (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 7, 2006



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