Travlin' Home Poem by Renee Marie

Travlin' Home



I be comin' home
with gifts from afar.
I be comin' home -
I are, I are.
I be thinkin'
'bout luck;
our sweet honey in jar -
...I be feelin' this luck,
I are, I are.
I be watchin' the clock
while a'tappin me foot
an' the hands move slow
an' me heart be a hook.
But I be comin' home
with gifts from afar
An' me loved ones be waitin'
like a twinklin' star.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 01 September 2012

I got that, its a car eating up the miles poem. Read mine - Home is - A little more structured but I think you will appreciate it. Adeline

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