Walter Sanson Lotilla

Rookie - 11 Points (November 21 / Philippines)

Treasured Moments - Poem by Walter Sanson Lotilla

I see... the sun rise... amidst the glow of thy presence
I see... your footsteps frolic... amongst the sandy shores... so serene
I remember... those twilight laughters...
... those sweet melodies that lingers...
... in the soothing fragrance... of the sea breeze

The touch... the scent... the warmth I so cherished... so deeply longed
... beyond the cold mountain mists
... beyond the grandeur of the city lights below

In the stairs of the cliff... our lips so sweetly touched
... in marvel of the mystic shores below
So many faraway nooks to rendezvous...
... yet time so little... yet so tender

My eyes slowly cry with tears unshed
... for it is my heart that bleeds... so profusely
In the day of the heart's afterglow... you'll soon be oceans away
... knowing not when to see your smile again
... knowing not when to feel your touch again

Perhaps... another moment to treasure...
... in dreams... in reality... in hope...


Comments about Treasured Moments by Walter Sanson Lotilla

  • Veteran Poet - 1,442 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (10/4/2011 3:29:00 AM)

    your longing for love, romance and loved one is very evident in your poem
    your last part is a blast
    ganda ganda ng tula (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Naidz Ladia (3/22/2009 7:17:00 PM)

    the appearance of this piece is unique..lines are decently lined with decent words...it's beautiful...add more poems walter...why 3 only?
    naizz (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Grace Maniquis (3/10/2008 1:27:00 AM)

    This is nice, really nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Grace Maniquis (3/10/2008 1:26:00 AM)

    This is nice, really nice. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, February 20, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, May 9, 2008


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