Treat Every Moment As Your Last Poem by Mary Murphy

Treat Every Moment As Your Last

Rating: 4.8


Today I thought about my death
What would I say with my very last breath?
Who would be there to watch me pass on?
Who would pray for me when I had gone?
Would people smile at the thought of me?
Would I leave behind a good memory?
Who would be crying as they placed me in the dirt?
How many people would I leave behind hurt?
Who knows the moment of when it will be,
Who knows if today is the last day I’ll see.
Each second of life is one second closer
to that second before my life’s final closure.
Make each moment count as though it were your last,
Some moments will seem slow, but will be gone so fast.
Nothing is guaranteed in this life on earth,
Each morning has been gift, since the gift of your birth.
The night may seem so close, but who knows if you will greet it.
For tonight death may be waiting and now your turn to meet it.
Yes today I thought about my death,
Could today be the day of my very last breath?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Homen Thangjam 18 November 2008

A yound lady grappling with the theme of death unsettles a bit. However, reading through, it turns out very charming. Nicely put. Breaking into a new paragraph from 'Make each moment count as....', would be structurally excellent. Excellent work.

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