Treblinka Poem by David Fainman

Treblinka

Rating: 5.0


Still -
A small town in Poland
Farmers, wagons, pigs…
And in summer
A phoenix of flowers.
It carries a church,
Old and worn
Like a boot, like a rosary fingered,
Off which mud and more
May slide, smoother than faith.

A train runs through
Softly hissing,
It is a sign of the times
To hide one's smoke,
To shut ash away better.
The houses are quite ash free
With a hint of growth, hushed.

A shop sells
Food, clothes, lampshades,
And to burn - fat logs only.
Some residents are also stout,
Have red faces
As if the blood stained their skins,
Not quite burned, not quite
Embarrassed by light,
Must be the cold,
The starkness of having nothing
To live down,
Not enough to burn.
It can be hard work living here.

You may hear the usual laughs,
Shouts, whistles, the odd cry….
It is a quiet, ordinary place
With nothing else to see now or to say,
Save a clearing, sudden in the forest,
Where you'll find a field of stones.

Sunday, July 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: holocaust
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A contemporary view of a village where an unspeakable horror was perpetrated
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 03 July 2016

An insightful piece of poetry depicting a ghost town haunted by atrocities of its past, elegantly brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing David.

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Margaret Alice Second 03 July 2016

Beautiful - the atmosphere created, the quiet, the cold, the past still present in the sight of the church, the people caught in a time warp - even if not intended, this is the feeling evoked in my heart - feeeling sorry for the peasants marked by their past, hoping nobody can ever induce them to give up their love for other people regardless of race and classification...

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