Triangle Of Emptiness Poem by Wandering Scarlet
Triangle Of Emptiness
the place where the world disappears
the place even death fears
as you step in the triangle of terror
the sky melts as life claims it bearer
the grass grows down, the sun shines brown
smoke burns fire, as you wish you could see higher
the water is dry, the sand is wet
the boat flies like a jet
and as the birds breathe empty skies
the wind blows with silent cries
you sit and wonder where you are
but the truth in reality is not very far
stones skipped over stones
bones broken on bones
the darkness of the light
it blinds your hands, its far too bright
lost we all are
if only we saw a star
hey scarlet......what a beautiful painting of words.............well, who knows maybe one day we'll face this kinda atmosphere...........well written piece
hmm... very interesting read i enjoyed it. its a great pieces.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 8:40:37 AM # 1.0.0.1119
In your poem A Taste Of Earth, rhyming worked out for you. I think it restricted you in this one and made the flowery if thats the right word, language, become dragged down. Also, I feel bad, but when I read this, I kept thinking, 'Bermuda triangle'