Udaya R. Tennakoon


Triangle of the life


No one around me
In my studio
Beside the laptop
Others are stand still

Table bed and stove
Triangle of the life
Cook write and sleep
Day passes so fast

Only night comes
Look at the bottle a side
A glass with appetite food
Enjoy a quarter of dark

Thought words and dream
Link together of hope
One pain in my heart
One part of the third

Some words that I write
Not close with my life
But because of you
I write with the hope

Submitted: Saturday, March 30, 2013

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,742 Points Babatunde Aremu (4/5/2013 5:09:00 AM)

    Nice poem. Most people go about this triangle daily. I like the poem. Keep writing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Titi Dale (3/30/2013 4:23:00 PM)

    Rhythm kept me engaged, here :) nice write! I love how you link everything together as the triangle does: D (Report) Reply

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