True Poem by Rupika Alekhya

True

Rating: 3.5


Suddenly everything seems clear.
Ports of golden past towards 'present' are gliding
Aft yonks charm is showering its drizzle;
Though stink of foul weather has not yet subdued.

To make alive past heart yet wishes,
Not realising 'present' sinking in treasures of past.

Life comes with surprises
Of which we are unaware.
So flow with the surge to every port
For each has different variables to offer.

It may not all be fair
But yes, 'twill be worth living.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yash Shinde 29 October 2012

lovely great write................bit imagery wonderful expressions :)

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Indranil Bhaduri 11 September 2012

Mindblowing write....Loved it so much...

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Payal Parande 04 September 2012

beautiful.........do i need ti say more cause i don't think words would express what i want to say cause it is beyond explanation......... thanks for sharing love, payal

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Sanjay Mehta 04 September 2012

Thanks for sharing. Life should move on so should we with time with an positive note as the ending of your work.

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Indeed a remarkable attempt on life and time! The choice of words apt has done wonders on the technical perfection of the lines. It is one of your best poems ever.Thank you for inviting to read

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Rupika Alekhya

Rupika Alekhya

Andhra Pradesh, Lives in Bengaluru
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