Trust Issues Poem by Athena Hood

Trust Issues



You trust someone and
You feel the futility
Of giving yourself

They end up wrecking
Every fragment of your soul
And you die inside

Tuesday, December 9, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: trust
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A semi(?) tanka i wrote on twitter. Spontaneously written. Enjoy, fellow poets.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 22 December 2014

They end up wrecking Every fragment of your soul And you die inside A beautiful poem dealing with inner death.A complicated issue dealt with simplicity and sincerity.Well expressed Child. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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