Truth And Change Poem by Soran M. H

Truth And Change

Rating: 5.0


Truth and Change

You lost all your fights
because you were
compassionate and respectful
because you were listening
to the language of logic
and your opponents were
illiterate, immoral, savage!
Now you are
far away from it all
withdrawn from the struggle

But now the days are lengthening
a voice is re-echoing inside you:
"May hope find the right door
and knock suddenly! "
But soon, even the days
the changing mind
are getting briefer again

Then you say
"If the long, dark winter nights
Pass again without seeing
the ghosts inside the black dreams
I will kiss the first narcissus of spring"
But soon
even that will wither.
Then confused you ask:
How will it tolerate
the scorching sun of
Truth's revolution?

January 2019

Truth And Change
Sunday, March 1, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: experience,peace,revolution
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 01 March 2020

Well done again Soran. Another beautifully written poem. Superb and captivating. It is mived emotions of the inner heart or deep concerns of the inner mind. It's one to let the reader to decide. It seems to me to balance finely on a knife-edge. Loved it! ! 10++ and added to my deep and food for thought locker. Thanks again Soran and take care my friend.

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Soran M. H 01 March 2020

part 2/I would appreciate your hard works, congratulation..you are very honest and trustful person, meanwhile this lovely comment is one of the best gift I have ever had, really the pen is speechless to say any thing else. forgive me..

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Soran M. H 01 March 2020

part1/ Dear poet and friend Shaun you are very good poetry writer and reader too, I know you can't live without the poem, It seems you want to correct the direction of life through your poems, as Arthur Rimbaud tried 150 years ago, that is why you want to capture every single moment in life and make it a wonderful poem,

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 March 2020

This is such a wonderful poem that pierces through the heart. Loved it. Thanks for sharing. 'But soon even that will wither. Then confused you ask: How will it tolerate the scorching sun of Truth's revolution? '...is awesome.10++++

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Soran M. H 07 March 2020

Thanks Dear poet Anil, I hope you have enjoyed it, your amazing comment it means so much too me, with Regards

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Suresh Kumar EK 05 January 2021

Truth's revolution is always scorching, It happens in your poetry Soran

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Anjandev Roy 03 January 2021

Excellent work....

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Soran M. H 13 August 2020

Dear Rose Marie Juan-austin, Hello, absolutely you are right, no all the changes would be positive, some times people want to fix some things but in the end they damage it completely, your wise reading always opening a new door to understanding the text differently, brilliant, Kind regards

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 August 2020

A beautiful poem that only a Poet who is perceptive and sensitive to what is happening around him can weave and deliver. A Poet knowledgeable in political changes and machineries. A Poet who had a wide array of experiences as regards humanity. To my Poem List and 10++.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 August 2020

Revolution advocates change to a system that is not responsive to the needs of the people. But sometimes the people behind the revolution are not true enough for the people and thus creating another cycle of chaotic system and might even worse delivering the people to total darkness

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