Turning Point Poem by Michelle Candelaria

Turning Point

Rating: 4.0


The bright rays of the sun
The breeze of a strong wind
The melodious chirping of birds
The lively laughter of children

The terrific heat and flooded road
The echo of a strong pouring rain
The land slides and rocks overthrown
The cry of an innocent maiden

There was past and there will be future
But today will always knock on our doors
With the face of sorrow and pain
No other remedy was left but to beg

Is hope still there?
Will the scratch of the matches work?
Is there any light waiting?
Or we will all die a DARK DEATH?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 03 January 2012

Great poem with remarkable logic and Naida is right I hope it is the way around

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 01 September 2011

WE SOMETIMES CAN'T STOP THINGS FROM HAPPENING AND THE TURNING POINT, THOUGH SAD AND SORROWFUL WILL BE ACCEPTED DESPITE OUT RESISTANCE NICE POEM I HOPE THE TURNING POINT WILL BE THE OTHER WAY AROUND

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Marie Bliss 05 August 2011

Nice poen Michelle! ! I also wrote a poem called turning points last year sometime. Kind regards marie

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Michelle Candelaria

Michelle Candelaria

Catanduanes, Philippines
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