Twilight Poem by zeinab sherif

Twilight



I wish u tell me who r u?
Or comfort me & say that u r not fye
I wish u take me high 2 the sky
Or just look at me & say I love u
Teach me how 2 fly if u were a peterban
& take me away 2 ur never land
Or just talk 2 me about it on the beach sand
& take ur eyes of me, if u can
Why would I smell the rose? !
Or why would I look at the moon? !
What is the light that appears at the noon? ! &
See, u made everything from my mind goes
Away from ur heart, I can't live
& inside ur heart, this is my nest
My heart in a diamond plat 2 u, I give
For it's the only place where it can rest
Twilight is one of the most successful romantic movies.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Omar Ibrahim 15 February 2010

i didn't see the movie...this poem is from the best of your new poems...beautiful metaphors are written here but you have to maintain a metaphor all over the poem.thanks for inviting me to read your new poem which i think are much better than the old poems....keep writing please. thanks for sharing.

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