Twinkee Girl Poem by bea kiddo
Twinkee Girl
I let you slide me
out of my snug little wrapper.
You bit in quickly,
and sucked every last bit
of my filling out.
After, my remains
were crushed in your hand
and discarded thoughtlessly.
You stepped on them and walked away
without even the slightest backward glance.
good poem I like it.Go on. I invite you to read my poem and comment.
Gloriously different and i really love it... im guessing twinkee is some kind of sweet but that there is a double edge to this piece, top notch piece which made me smile but worried of the underlining clues...tyvm...karen
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/3/2024 3:20:27 PM # 1.0.0.1119
nice write....and i straight away see a disturbing undertone... the metaphor isn't too deep not to grasp the painful under currents.... good on poetic parameters and excellent context....so common an issue...its almost everyday liked reading it tc