Twisted Love Poem by teri bronte

Twisted Love

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I gave you my love and my trust
Then you abused it with all your angry fuss
All your anger left me confused
Leaving me in tears and my body bruised

I do not reconize you anymore
What we had together, you beat to the the core
God says do unto others as you'd do unto you
You're stuck with your anger now that we're through

You taught me to keep my wall up high
To protect myself from your vicious lies
I am beginning to repair my pain
I don't think I'll every be the same

My joy of life that you took away
Will hopefully come back someday
And when your day of judgement calls
The Lord will make you feel it all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I can relate to this its hurts a lot but its so true.. You put a lot of feeling into this poem that makes me smile for the feelings you wrote.. But you should never give up hope and keep on writing.. Your a great poet... I also love your ending about judgement day a lot of us will be answering to him above and hopefully the ones who break hearts will have to answer for that.. Great piece of work

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Billy Joe Collins 13 November 2008

don't give up hope what a great poem thanks for sharing

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