Two Lost Souls ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Two Lost Souls ~

Rating: 5.0


I'm playing the blues
to touch that special place
which is the depths of my soul
miles of haunting melodies
still rings true today
emotions on fire
magic and warm tears
beyond and full of wonder
that's music for you
Yet, falling on deaf ears.

Words seep through from time gone past
We're just two lost souls
We played so much together
I wish you were here
Tears spring from my eye
I don't know how to survive
This dark long night
Where devils are partying
Dancing under the moonlit
In dark water below.

Wednesday, July 29, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: blues,life,lost love,separation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 30 July 2020

I'm playing the blues to touch that special place which is the depths of my soul miles of haunting melodies still rings true today emotions on fire magic and warm tears beyond and full of wonder- - - An amazingly beautiful poem of love, thanks for sharing.

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Juhaina Tumlu 29 July 2020

Wow so well written Words seep through from time gone past We're just two lost souls We played so much together I wish you were here

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 July 2020

Although it is difficult to know how to survive, still this is very interesting to feel life with deepest core of love. Separation gives pain. Darkness is removed by light. Soul hunts the melodies of love from very far. Music for love is excellently expressed through beauty of perception. An amazing poem is excellently penned....10

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T Rajan Evol 29 July 2020

Wonderful expression, Asim I don't know how to survive This dark long night Where devils are partying Dancing under the moonlit In dark water below.

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