U Still Think I Care? ? ! ! Poem by Rudy Hossam

U Still Think I Care? ? ! !

Rating: 5.0


You still think I care? ?
When I know I no longer do
You were a memory in the past
That took the pain and sorrow with it
And got lost

I never wanted to lose you
I always wanted to be with you
But now I no longer care
About you or about your life

I don't care who you like
I don't care who you love
I don't care who you want to live with
I don't care if you want me or not

It's your life
Live it the way you want
It's your life
Take it and go far way from me
It's your life
As long as I'm not yours

You broke my heart
I put it back together
And throw away the piece that liked you
'cause I don't want you anymore around

That's all what I want to say
That I really don't care
I don't love you anymore
I don't want you anymore

So do you still think I care? ? ! !
'cause I think...............I still do
I STILL DO.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Little Hatila ;) 07 September 2008

wow...it is really a sad piece...well done lovely girl and keep going....

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John Smith 17 January 2009

Beautifully written. I can relate to finding the conflict within yourself. You can't live with them, you can't live without them. Great peice of work.

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XxBrokenHeartedCupidxX ! ! 31 December 2008

let all that sadness and anger flow out of you.

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Rita Hawkins 31 December 2008

Let the anger and sadness flow out, that way you will be prepared for anything.

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Cain XXX 14 October 2008

angry, sad, awesome. a very accurate portrayal of rejection and love. this was awesome.

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Blue Eyes 14 September 2008

waw girl u r definately great writer..keep going

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Rudy Hossam

Rudy Hossam

Maryland (U.S.A)
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