Rudy Hossam

Rookie (Maryland (U.S.A))

Total Trust.....Lost - Poem by Rudy Hossam

This is the story of the total trust
You gave me and I lost
I was a bad thing
I never used to think

More than once I dropped
And you helped me on my feet up
And then again I didn't care
And walked in that very same dark track

You pushed me to show me the light
And that there is a better track
Straight, bright and no one can dropp in it

In front of you I walked in it
But still the dark was what I wished
You saw me walk to the light
You gave me your total trust

You never thought I'll go back to the dark
After I knew that there was light
But too bad I did
You somehow saw me in it
And all the trust you gave me I lost
Because you saw me dropp again
But it was a bigger drop

You told me help yourself out
This time I really regret
But you said to late
You've dropped
And only you can help yourself out

Because if I help you
You'll return back to it
That very dark scary track
And here I'm begging you
To help me out of it

And you'll see me in that light
Never wanting that dark life
Please help me out
And give me Ur forgiveness
After I take Allah's.

Comments about Total Trust.....Lost by Rudy Hossam

  • Rookie - 10 Points Sarah Abdullah (1/28/2009 12:47:00 PM)

    Loved it....
    Really Good one...
    Well done.. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Holly Hayden (1/28/2009 9:49:00 AM)

    i like this one very good (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Danni Scott (1/21/2009 4:23:00 PM)

    this is really well written, i cant help but think of a train whiltst reading it and I don't know why. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie XxBrokenHeartedCupidxX ! ! (12/31/2008 4:05:00 PM)

    i like this poem very much because its about someone earning trust and then losing it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (11/10/2008 7:02:00 PM)

    well penned......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tia Maria (10/2/2008 6:35:00 AM)

    Once was lost but now am found was blind but now I see... I liked this poem very very much - just a gentle reminder which we all need..... and for all the lost souls out there :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 2, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, October 3, 2008

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