Un Real Poem by Natasha Clark

Un Real



i cant belive that i can be this mean
no matter how hard i try
i cant stop hurting her
what am i supposed to
she wont move on
and im not sure if i want her to
but i cant keep hurting her
it sucks because i wish we could just go back to the way we were
but we cant ive caused too much pian
i wish i never met her then she wouldnt be hurting
she wouldnt have shed tears over me and she woud be beter off without me
y cant she see that im no good for her? ? ?
i wish she could just open up her eyes and see
this is no good for her or for me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Barbara Terry 07 May 2009

Love can be a very hurtful thing. Love between two lovers is a journey into emotional turmoil. Love between a mother and a daughter is filled with admonitions and and anger. Love between a husband and a wife is filled with hate, cheating, beatings, and mental abuse of yelling, condemning, calling each other names. Love at best is a heartstring commodity that is easily broken. This is very well written and expressed. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Natasha Clark

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