Unbroken Poem by Laura arwen

Unbroken

Rating: 4.0


I feel broken
all the time
Nowadays I feel
a little empty
because I can't
go where I
want
I'm too stressed
to reduce my
chaos or to
use too much
the phone
Sometimes I feel
imprisoned by my
own fears or
obsessions
For me it's
natural to be
lost in something
Probably I have
lost the naturalness
of creativity
I feel mentally
unstable because I'm
scared to have
more restrictions
I'm all alone
in my battles
I need more
confidence with the
material loneliness
Many times people
consider me useless
because I'm not
their stereotype of
girl
I'm unsatisfied with
my progresses because
I'm not fast
as I want
Every day I
do a mental
process on which
is my right
place or avoid
a bad work
I have a
lot of pressure
on myself

Wednesday, November 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: me,myself
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deluke Muwanigwa 18 November 2020

Good one. Even talking about it as you have done. Ummm....some advice from uncle Deluke...be the Moment man.....Moment woman. Each day lived as is. The world is too heavy to carry. So you are bored write 10 poems a day...its a good hobby.

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Khairul Ahsan 18 November 2020

Keep writing poems and share your thoughts with the world (I mean poets from all over the world) . Read others' poems a lot. I am sure you will find some, to which you will be able to relate yourself. I hope, by doing so, you can release some of your pressure and feel sress free. This poem itself might have released some of your pressure. Best wishes, happy writing!

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