(May 26th,1990 / Kano State, Nigeria)

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Uncertain

Her eyes screams come back
her mouth whispers go away
her touch preach stay with me
her tears says you're hurting me

A fine lady in the dillema of love
to choose is a different choice
what she wants is lost from her
and tames got what she loves from her

A stand in the rain for one more kiss
is what my soul desire
but am left to drown in my pain
and my tears pours hidden in the rain

The judgementof my heart delivers and says
'm moving on...
following the trail of the sun
shinning and cooling as it is sent

Submitted: Wednesday, August 01, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, August 01, 2012

Comments about this poem (Uncertain by Jide 'Pounds' Ibitoye )

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (8/2/2012 2:53:00 AM)

    love and desire are good stuff of poetry/fine

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (8/2/2012 2:48:00 AM)

    love-desire: are good stuff of poetryfine

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (8/2/2012 2:47:00 AM)

    love-desire: are good stuff of poetryfine

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (8/2/2012 2:46:00 AM)

    love-desire: are good stuff of poetryfine

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  • Elizabeth Mpanga (8/1/2012 4:02:00 AM)

    this is lovely jide. sounds alot like me

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