Uncomfortable Look Poem by Chan Mongol

Uncomfortable Look

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I am offended by your bad, hard look!
Don't read and study me like a book! !
You are embarrassing me in that way!
Don't eat me like that and do survey? ?

A man is known by his writings, deeds!
Rich or poor should be decided on needs! !
I am not an object that you gaze and gaze!
Don't you be engaged tp monitor me to amaze! !

Don't you try to swallow me in the blackmagic!
Staring over a minute like that, makes one sick! !
Take a break and move on to do something!
Stop treating me like an object in such looking! !

It's OK to stare at the speaker, in a public place! .
You can evaluate speaker's body, figure and face! !
You can talk eye to eye in the Police or Military!
But without an interview, such is not a mandatory! !

I don't like that people treat me like a stranger!
I am not an alien but one from same human feature! !
We belong to one race, same kind, we all are equal
Advocacy for the equality is my nutshell bubble! !

Uncomfortable Look
Tuesday, November 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: eyes,manners
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 22 November 2016

A beautiful poem really. The last stanza makes your intention clear which is a noble one. That we are humans and we are all equal. With a strong message the lines flow so beautifully.10+++

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