Undetachable Moments Poem by Rini Shibu
Undetachable Moments
If ever i have to choose
between mist and breeze
I would say winter breeze
dont take the mist from me
And stay with me till dawn
As it sweeps through me
Covering me in murkiness
I could feel the wetness
of undetachable moments
and breath in the misty fragrance
Giving freshness and pleasure
all day long like heaven on earth
Hi Rini, Lovely write. Loved these lines especially, breath in the misty fragrance Giving freshness and pleasure all day long like heaven on earth -unnikrishnan
A very sweet and lovely poem on winter days. Very well crafted with a smooth flow. Loved it Rini.
Nature at its best during this time as it evokes love in every living being. A fantastic poem with great imagery.10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/19/2024 10:03:14 PM # 1.0.0.1119
nice sentiments Rini lovely soft poetry!) 10 ++++++++++++++++++++