Unfinished Conversations Poem by Anita Atina

Unfinished Conversations



Unfinished conversations

Brief diversions

From digression

Or procrastination!



Lost agenda’s

Thoughts astray

Goals asunder

Confusion derails!



Weighed inertia

Indecision suspends

Inaction stalls

Progress depends!



Emotional blackhole

Lifeless moles

Pained graveyard

Life ignored!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 26 February 2008

Anita, this works well because the vignettes posed by each line bear the unfinished conversations forward in time. Rgds, Ivan

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