I’m locked in a void with no one else
I've given up: Can't save myself
I'm showing the signs but you still cant see
The hopeless creature that has become me.
Darkness presses in and somehow I don't fear
Shadows that haunted me for years
The walls close in and press against me; cold.
For so long I've had to wait
Fighting the shadows, growing old
But now I have surrendered to Fate
You had the time but you just didn't care
That for so long I was willing to share
My soul my life all my few years
The time is gone and now it seems
I'm drowning in my own tears
Smothered by my screams.
been there, got the t-shirt... great poem, touches feelings I had almost forgotten
Unrequainted love, How it breaks your heart, But not in one foul swoop; No, it's much more painful and hard. You give your heart, Little by little. But instead of yours, Being topped up by anothers, It just shrinks, And dies, And hurts. I've been there mate - it sucksxx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great poem, but I have to disagree with the guys! You have to deal with it and move on! Everything is for a reason, don't get stuck in a rut and hate love and the world, just because you took the chance and got hurt. Now that really would be a victory for giving in and copping out! Smile in the face of adversity and adversity, will crumble and smile back. 10 for getting it out, Tai