Unusual Experience Poem by Bipasha Dutt

Unusual Experience

Rating: 5.0


It was during my childhood,
May be at the age of nine,
I experienced something unusual,
Something difficult to define

I was sitting on my terrace,
Probably around evening five,
Suddenly I felt one with the universe,
I was amazed as I was too naive

I felt everything was connected,
I felt a strange vibration,
I didn't know how to articulate it,
Couldn't give my experience any expression

Now after so many years later,
I try hard to repeat the experience,
But never can I connect again
To that higher intelligence.

Thursday, May 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A one of a kind experience, Bipasha. You are lucky , you felt everything connected. Not all are blessed to experience the same in our respective lifetime. Very well conveyed and crafted.

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Bipasha D 08 May 2019

Thank you Rose for your comment. I do not know if I was lucky or not. Like everyone I do have my share of ups and downs. To be honest, nothing really changed in my life after that...Only thing is it created a sense of seeking in me and made me realize even if some things do not make much logical sense still I can't discard it.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 May 2019

I felt everything is connected, I felt a strange vibration......I can very well imagine your creative mind at that very point....so well penned with illustrious poetic beauty.....10

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Bri Edwards 05 April 2022

Ha! I've NEVER connected to 'higher intelligence', and, ....believe me, all others have a 'higher intelligence' than I have. Is yours a true story? Maybe someone had drugged your tea. bri ;)

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Bipasha D 29 August 2020

I completely agree with you Glen, even I do not know what triggered it. We can never summon it, so true!

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Glen Kappy 28 August 2020

How to convey the impact of an experience like this? It’s interesting to me you had it at that age. My experience of it happened in my early twenties. I was just walking down a street with nothing in mind that preceded or triggered it. And no, we cannot summon this samadhi or satori experience. But it’s memory stays with us to show us what clarity is. -Glen

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Chinedu Dike 27 May 2019

This poem is an impressive work of art that resonates with the soul. Thanks for sharing this sublime experience of yours and do remain enriched.

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Bipasha D 28 May 2019

Thank you. Glad to hear from you after a long time

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Chinedu Dike 27 May 2019

and is so important for creating and writing songs and for a sculptor, a poet or a novelist. Its that same kind of innocence, that same level of consciousness, that you create from. And kids have it. I feel it right away from animals and children and nature. Of course." - Michael Jackson (Report) Reply

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Bipasha D 28 May 2019

So true, thank you for all the insightful comments.

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